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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2013-07-28 09:15 PM





It's been like early dawn all day
and I need you to wake me up
The hours pass along waiting
for the sun to come and say
“Time for waking”
The gray won't go away
no matter how many times
I fill my coffee cup

It is eight o'clock at night
and I need you to cuddle me up
The hours passed along waiting
for the sun to come out today
Time for setting
The gray didn't go away
no matter how many times
I filled my coffee cup

LGR(C)7/28/13

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-07-28 09:28 PM


Some times it is like that, Lori. Gets to be aggravating.

~*~ Did you hear about the cross eyed teacher who lost her job because she couldn't control her pupils? ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2013-07-28 09:34 PM


excellent sleeping weather...

Lori 3-)zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2013-07-29 10:23 PM


enjoyed...James
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2013-07-29 11:39 PM


Thanks James!

Lori  

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