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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2013-07-24 08:07 PM


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So now
You are
An angel

Please keep vigil
Against my talent
For evening stupid
Regardless urges
Oblivious moods

It is a selfish
Role I give you
Please take it
And guard me well

Here in the air
I breathe the sky
So blue

That little star
Beside the moon


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2013-07-25 07:14 AM


Your little star is surely happy with your loving request and you will feel the effects.

I think it is only natural that we reach out to those we love who have gone ahead on the trip to the other dimension.

Very beautiful and very poignant.

Margherita

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2013-07-25 10:32 PM


This is very sweet.
I love how you refer to Helen as little star.  

Very touching~~

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2013-10-08 04:43 PM


And now maybe you have met each other again on the celestial meadows ...

May you both be at peace and enjoy the absence of pain.

Margherita

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
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4 posted 2013-10-08 05:13 PM


I hope your angel hears your heart and guards you well )

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2013-10-08 06:47 PM


Dear John,

Knowing that in some way transmissions will be received, we will miss you very much.

After all of the hugs you receive from whom that some of us are convinced will be there for you...rest...and know. You did well on Earth. You will do even more now, because Serenity and my brother are there to kick you in the arse if you don't.

Sending love and hugs,

Sunshine

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
6 posted 2013-10-12 10:19 PM


Rest in peace my friend.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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U.S , Ca
7 posted 2013-10-12 11:25 PM


Lucid, or rather the message is clear and also few can do the same
secondhanddreampoet
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8 posted 2013-10-13 10:24 AM


All of them, John included now, are those "little stars beside the moon!"

Us Nam era guys are all fast fading away ...

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