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Open Poetry #48

Beads

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2013-07-14 03:53 PM

She beads the branches to its leaves
on days when clouds collide
and sparrows line the fence
with songs of premonition,
she beads the branches to its leaves
her tender rain, pure symmetry.

[This message has been edited by EmmaRose (07-15-2013 07:22 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2013-07-14 04:01 PM

quote:
with songs of premonition I have yet
to read,

Two lines which sent shivers down my spine. I liked this poem very much.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

2 posted 2013-07-14 04:06 PM

You have a soft eloquence that dances through this piece to that unread song. Lovely piece of writing.

Michael

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2013-07-15 06:30 AM

Magical visuals, dear EmmaRose, lovely Poetess.

Margherita

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