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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794


0 posted 2013-07-12 07:03 PM



When I was but a wee small boy,
I had me a favorite toy,
It was a stick that I had found,
Out in the yard, down on the ground,
Now you might think I am a fool,
But that there stick was mighty cool,
For it could be a mighty sword,
So I could fight the pirate hoard,
Or it might be a gatlin' gun,
Playin' soldier sure was fun,
Sometimes I swang it like a bat,
Sometimes I poked the neighbor's cat,
(I was young what can I say,
please don't report me to the NSPCA)
Now that there stick could even be,
A fishing pole, slick as can be,
On the bank down on Slate crick,
That was one mighty awesome stick,
I might use it as an oar,
Or to prop open the barnyard door,
I kept it by my bed at night,
So midnight monsters I could smite,
But then one day I lost my stick,
I was so sad, it made me sick,
Didn't have no cause to play,
Moped around the house all day.
Ma said, "Tim, why don't you pick
yourself out another stick?"
I replied, "I can't do that Ma,
that stick was the bestest, I ever saw."
I looked high and I looked low,
Every place that I would go,
And to this day, when a stick I see,
I ask of it, "Do you know me?"
Nary a stick has answered back,
My life ruined, a real sad sack,
Farewell dear stick, my childhood friend,
And now this poem is done, goodbye, the end.

© Copyright 2013 Tim - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-07-12 07:34 PM


Hah! Brings back memories of me and a stick I used like a baseball bat and swatted rocks that I would pitch in the air. Many a day under a huge oak tree in the summer I played the stick and rock game. As Bob Hope would say, "Thanks for the memories."

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2013-07-12 10:14 PM


Cute poem, Tim. Enjoyed.
               Ida

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2013-07-13 12:55 PM


Gotta love the limitless, playful imagination and energy of youth.  It's sad we lose touch with that with all the obligations of adulthood.  I had a stick or two in my time.  This poem gave me a sincere reminiscing for those unhindered, ambition filled days.  

Michael

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