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Open Poetry #48
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JamesJBowie
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since 2013-07-09
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0 posted 2013-07-10 01:05 AM



I can feel the marbles
slipping through my fingers
little glass reminders
of what I am losing
The problem is
this is not a game
and only now do I realize
I never knew how to play

I am back and yes this is Mine =)

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Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
1 posted 2013-07-10 02:22 AM


I like your poem and can relate to...

"The problem is
this is not a game
and only now do I realize
I never knew how to play"

Thank you for sharing )


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2013-07-10 07:07 AM


I love this! When I read the title I was hoping it would be about that kind of Marbles.  You did not disapoint!

Lori

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