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Rick
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0 posted 2013-07-07 08:03 AM



Change is such a challenge, but also such release
The mind it sets the borders, decisions move to peace
Money holds the boundaries, families hold the tie
Dreams and fate the destiny, time the gift to try

Different things they test us, events they turn the key
The what ifs are the turning point, the choices what will be
Each venture strengthens inner bond, such joy to live a dream
Change; the welcomed journey, with memories that had been



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-07-07 08:17 AM


There are a lot of rhyming within the structure of this poem, and well done too.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Rick
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2 posted 2013-07-07 08:29 AM


Thanks JerryPat2 for your reply, I've been off PIP for a while, but looking forward to sharing a few thoughts from time to time, have a great day.

Rick

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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3 posted 2013-07-07 08:56 AM


Rick, this is wonderful!
I need to post it on my mirror to keep this perspective. Will enjoy having you back.

Lori

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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4 posted 2013-07-07 11:30 AM


Sounds about right to me, Rick.
                             Ida

Gale
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5 posted 2013-07-07 06:46 PM


Love this one )

"Dreams and fate the destiny, time the gift to try

Different things they test us, events they turn the key"

)))

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