Out of a Sound Sleep – Senryu

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Open Poetry #48

Out of a Sound Sleep – Senryu

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-07-06 07:16 AM

I'm awake at night
I hear the sounds of sirens
Hope they'll be in time

©June 16, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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1 posted 2013-07-06 07:53 AM

ARRGGGGHHHH!!!! You and your kick in the gut last lines Jerry! Well this one takes the cake. Very well done. That was a very touching portrait of being all alone.

Lori

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

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South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-07-06 10:16 AM

Sorry about that last line, Lori. I just can't seem to help myself. Thanks for your "ARRGGGGHHHH!!!!"

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Gale
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since 2013-06-10

Posts 578
Russia

3 posted 2013-07-06 05:56 PM

"Hope they'll be in time"

And so do I.
When I hear a siren.
I've just heard about the air crash in San Francisco (((

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-07-06 05:58 PM

Yeah, I've been seeing video and reading about the crash in San Francisco on Facebook. Facebook had the report before anyone I think. Looking at the burned-out plane I am surprised so many people walked away from the plane. Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Gale.

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