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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2013-06-30 12:17 PM


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We’re alone—
Just you and I

It’s your special place
The sky is blue
Sunlight shines
In your long hair

Water ripples
Over colored stones
Oak leaves rustle
A bird sings

There’s nothing
Or no one
To make us less
Than who we are

The air is cool—
I take your hand


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Margherita
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1 posted 2013-06-30 02:10 PM


Just perfectly enchanting.

Margherita

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2 posted 2013-06-30 02:32 PM


Beautiful in its simplicity.
Gale
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3 posted 2013-07-01 05:23 PM


Love it!
Huan Yi
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4 posted 2013-07-01 06:50 PM


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Thank you all


John


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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2013-07-03 01:02 AM


a pleasure...James
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