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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2013-06-29 05:07 AM


It’s not in the way you comb your hair
or in the way you speak, laugh, eat,
but always and ever straightforwardly so
in the way you do not love me.

And there in that way disrespect breeds
and gives birth to despicable offspring
who disrupt the flow of everyone’s soul
and break up the everyday meaningful.

But, oh, in that way you do not love me
doors open unto the mystery realms
to show and reveal all the secrets and lies
hidden beneath the seemingly innocent.  

And it’s in the way you do not love me
that demands the bring down to earth
of a rebellious yet courageous spirit  
who knows the value of peace.  

But peace, glorious peace, labours through layers
with the speed of an overfed toad
unable to jump from there to here
in the blink of an all seeing eye.

And it’s in the way you do not love me
that happiness grins and dances a jig
because it is known that overfed toads
will one day be hungry again!

Helen / 29 June 2013


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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-06-29 06:53 AM


Very insightful piece of work here, Helen. I hear you loud and clear, and "It's in the way you do not love me" which sends clear and distasteful messages that it is time to say adieu.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2013-06-29 07:21 AM


Thanks, Jerry.  I did that a long time ago but now am just waiting for that ... toad to be hungry again.  Can't totally wipe away more than thirty years of my life when mention of him issues forth from the offspring. In between, however, I am at peace - thankfully.


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