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Open Poetry #48

Solitude and Anonymity

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2013-06-28 09:10 PM

  Solitude and Anonymity

Along the traceless way of
this deep-wooded stream
where even the rocks and
  trees
sing anthems of praise to
solitude, freedom and the
  wilderness,
dappled sunbeams
shadow-dance with our
finest day-dream fantasies
of other lives and love
beneath a boundless azure
sea of mystic cloud-ships
forever slipping past the
simmering summer sun.
Here a million hidden
infinitesimal nocturnal things
  and broken hearts
may await the twilight’s song
and beautiful anonymity
  of the night
to face the world again.

                --- b. e. adams (6/28/2013)

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2013-06-29 03:49 AM

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, Bruce. I lingered long in these deep woods.

Owl

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-06-29 06:46 AM

Time and time again I marvel at your way with words.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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3 posted 2013-06-29 08:36 AM

Thanks to both of you for your most kind
words about my humble lil' "poetic scribble" !

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2013-06-30 09:08 PM

Very, very lovely, Bruce.

Alison

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

5 posted 2013-07-01 08:07 AM

Wow, Bruce! You've always written well about nature but lately it seems to me that there's more "heart" in your words - more feeling, more humanity or just more of something that I may not be finding the right words for. Enjoyed as usual!

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
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6 posted 2013-07-02 01:06 PM

thanks to each and all of you grand-fine poets ... for your lovely comments on this 'write!'

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