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Gale
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since 2013-06-10
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0 posted 2013-06-24 08:27 AM





Live and learn, wait and see
That’s she often hears
Get in touch - you and she
Find it’s not so clear!

If you tried, you would get
She’s the kind of girl
That sometimes makes you dead
Wounding your soul

Yes, she waits, sees and learns
Yeah, she knows enough
Many things she concerns
But you feel she’s tough

What she says is the truth
She can’t see the pain
That she brings passing through
As a hurricane

In her soul she believes
Better not to hide
So she more likes to live
With an open mind

Never thinks of the cause
Making dogs asleep
Why the thorns on your rose
If she knew, she’d weep

But the blindness of youth
Keeps her view naïve
Still she knows nor the Truth
Nor the way to live


18/06/2013

[This message has been edited by Gale (06-24-2013 09:32 AM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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1 posted 2013-06-24 09:08 AM


It all comes down to living long enough for truth and understanding AND intelligence which will form inside of her a trinity from which she can draw on.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Gale
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since 2013-06-10
Posts 578
Russia
2 posted 2013-06-24 10:03 AM


Jerry, you're right )
But it's hard to correct something, that you can't see and feel.
I think that often tactlessness can be congenital. Because any ability has its reverse, and our weak points are the back side of our strong points.
And I guess, it's not only time that she needs to understand some truths.

[This message has been edited by Gale (06-24-2013 11:51 AM).]

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