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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2013-06-18 08:02 PM



Little did I know
How it would hurt so inside
To lose my last hope

I always believed
I would hold onto the dream
I'd find you someday

Instead you are gone
And the things I need to say
Are just ashes now

Can't stop the anger
Don't know how to stop the pain
Because ...you are gone

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-06-18 08:07 PM


It is an awful feeling that you don't think will ever go away. But it will. Maybe not completely, but it will enough that you can live with it and not have it ripping your insides out every time you think of it. And you will begin to think of it less and less. Until then, I understand all too well what the pain is like. Still . . . someday you will be able to give your heart to another very special person.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2013-06-19 01:08 AM


Fine writing...James
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