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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
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a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2013-06-14 02:02 PM


  Love and the book of Time

You are more radiant
than any Summer morn.
The warmth of your heart
and light of you gentle spirit
eclipse even the zenith-sun or
the dazzling stars that dance
on any moon-bright night;
and, unlike the passing
glories of this season’s
green and golden days,
these lines of simple truth
like my deepest love for you
shall shine forever within
the immortal book of Time.

                   --- b. e. adams (6/14/2013)


© Copyright 2013 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2013-06-15 04:47 AM


How beautiful, dear Bruce. A sparkling gem.

No doubt the stars never stop to dance, but on a moon-bright night we might not see them in their maximum performance. But with the eyes of romance the vision becomes magnificent always ...

Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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2 posted 2013-06-26 06:16 AM


You are the ultimate romantic poet, Bruce. Always perfect love and beauty.
                             Ida

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3 posted 2013-06-30 08:57 PM


Beautiful, romantic - this reads like a slivery spider web.  Delicate in its beauty.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2013-07-03 01:12 AM


enjoyed...James
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