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2islander2
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0 posted 2013-06-09 02:35 PM



To wash me in the morning,
I do not need a soap,
nor of wash glove,

To wash me in the morning,
I do not need a shower
nor of rare essences,

To wash me in the morning,
I just need a smile
and I am pretty clean.

© Copyright 2013 yann rolland - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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1 posted 2013-06-09 08:30 PM


LOL!  I get dirtier than that!!!

love it.

j.

Margherita
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2 posted 2013-06-10 03:13 AM




Here comes my smile to contribute to give your day the right start.

This is deeply beautiful, because we can rub and rub and still not be satisfied with our sterile cleanness ... but a smile is a spark of love that makes us feel loved and the rest follows automatically ...

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-06-10 06:57 PM


Wonderful...James
2islander2
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4 posted 2013-06-11 01:47 AM


thanks jwesley for the humoristic answer, smiles clean the soul surely , and I was dirty too,

have a nice day


yann

2islander2
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5 posted 2013-06-11 01:50 AM


Hi margherita, I love your answer, so lovely and true, your understanding of the poem, proves I was right to write it (lol) self-esteem can't be bad (lol again)

have a nice day


yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2013-06-11 01:51 AM


thanks a lot james,


yann

Gale
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7 posted 2013-06-11 10:10 AM


It's very true )
Such a philosophical idea! )))

2islander2
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8 posted 2013-06-11 11:55 AM


thanks a lot gale for the supportive and delicate comment,
yann



Marchmadness
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9 posted 2013-06-12 04:01 PM


Smiles do work wonders, yann.
                        Ida

2islander2
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10 posted 2013-06-12 09:57 PM


thanks a lot Ida, nicely written, comments do thet too ,

have a nice day
yann

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11 posted 2013-06-13 03:54 AM



latearrival
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12 posted 2013-06-13 09:34 AM


A smile on the grubbiest face can still  pass it on heartily.
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