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Margherita
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0 posted 2013-06-08 05:29 AM



  


* * *


You are in my thoughts
I am in yours
collision of stars

Your love expands within me
mine expands within you
inundation of life

Your essence unites with mine
mine unites with yours
alignment with the Source

Your spirit dances in mine
mine dances in yours
quantum leap into bliss divine

* * *

© Copyright 2013 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-06-08 06:39 AM


It is all there, Margherita, everything is said and everything is the way it should be for peaceful coexistence. Beautiful phrased in each and every verse.  

~*~ What does a clock do when it's hungry? It goes back four seconds. ~*~

katahdin
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2 posted 2013-06-09 01:58 AM


Wonderful poem, Enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

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3 posted 2013-06-09 11:52 AM


Dear friend

My pen bends to you and to your letters
How wonderful you are.

Thank you so much.

I miss you

Chourouk

2islander2
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4 posted 2013-06-09 02:37 PM


oh margherita, quelle est belle cette correspondance entre les étoiles et les sentiments, it is just amazing and fabulous


yann

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5 posted 2013-06-10 07:03 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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6 posted 2013-06-12 09:45 PM


love that 'quantum leap' into divine bliss!
RedStoneEB
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7 posted 2013-06-13 12:48 PM


Margherita,

It is a pleasure to read your written words again, you have a deep understand of the purpose and cause and also the source of love, and it shows so well in your verses.

I enjoyed this piece.

RS

Margherita
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8 posted 2013-06-13 01:11 PM


Thank you, dear Jerry, for your kind comment ... in love indeed we touch all there is, though we never quite succeed in rendering the feel of "everything", yet it is fun to try always anew.

Thank you, dear Kat, for stopping by and telling me you enjoyed my words.

Dear Chourouk, beautiful girl, I miss you too. Would love to read your own words again. Thank you for your warm and loving comment here. Hugs.

Cher Yann, c'est le résultat d'une méditation très profonde ... thank you so much for your special comment.

Dear James, thank you for enjoying my words and telling me so.

Thank you, dear Bruce, yes that is indeed the secret means to feel one with the Whole.

Dear Lee, we were commenting on each other's poems at the same time. Thank you so much for your kind words. It's good to see you here.

Margherita
Love to all,

EmmaRose
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9 posted 2013-06-14 09:38 AM


what a beautiful konstellation you and yours have kreated.

i am so sorry, to use a 'k' ...my silly komputer is having issues with some of the letters here.

but i loved the poem so had to komment

Honeybunch
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10 posted 2013-06-14 12:12 PM


Beautiful, Margherita!  
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11 posted 2013-06-14 04:46 PM


Margherita - The learned ones say that our Earth began from a collision of stars. It seems that collisions, espeically of the human kind, are an inheritance passed on to its inhabitants and written of so eloquently by you. I most enjoyed this M. Namyh
Margherita
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12 posted 2013-06-15 05:30 AM


Dear EmmaRose, thank you so much for your loving komment, enjoyed your komputer's wish to feel young and use k instead of c ... (young Italians always use k instead of c ... for example in the word "che" (what) which becomes "ke".) So you see your komputer must have a nostalgic youth attack!

Thank you so much, dear Helen, for stopping by and enjoying this.

Dear Namyh, I love your comment, thank you so much. In a collision of "human stars" we might be fragmented, but then all the fragments unite singularly and are experiencing the union endlessly ... a cosmic bliss indeed.

Love to all,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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13 posted 2013-06-24 06:42 AM


Margherita,

No one here writes like you do.  You simply envelope me with images and emotion as I read your poetry.

Thank you for the gifts that you share with us.

Love,
Alison

Margherita
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14 posted 2013-06-27 04:57 AM


Beloved Alison, thank you from my heart for your vibrant visit here that brought me joy.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Lady Goodman
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15 posted 2013-06-27 11:33 AM


lovely as always

dearest Margherita...

I needed this today, very much so.

It's like? I took a wrong turn, and I lost my peace of mind. I think I need more trees in my life. A good dog, too. Maybe a garden...? A picket fence, with a stone walkway--- and wait a minute. It was all that wishing that got me in trouble in the first place!

*hugs you*

Margherita
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16 posted 2013-06-27 06:02 PM


Dear Karen, I wish you to manifest all the things you dream of, trees, a dog and a garden and all the things that bring joy into our lives. If we had no desires we would miss some of the brightest colors that life showers us with.

Thank you so much for telling me you enjoyed my words.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Marchmadness
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17 posted 2013-06-28 03:23 AM


You always write with such beauty and grace, Margherita.
                          Ida

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18 posted 2013-06-28 09:31 PM


Margherita,

If one doesn't read this under the right conditions, then it may not happen; but when one does have all of one's surroundings synchronizing to a good pitch, then

this poem is bliss.

And thank you....I'll be off of the ceiling in a moment.

Margherita
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19 posted 2013-06-30 03:09 PM


Thank you, dear Ida and dear Karilea, I so enjoyed your loving comments.

... always keeping my feet firmly in the air!


Love,
Margherita



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20 posted 2013-06-30 08:59 PM


My nephew died yesterday of cancer.  I think he is in that collision of stars.  He'd like that a lot.

Alison

Margherita
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21 posted 2013-07-02 01:55 PM


Dearest ((((Alison)))), so sorry for your tremendous loss, but yes I trust your beloved nephew is on a trip of fabulous discoveries out there where only Love reigns. It's nonetheless very sad that so many young lives move on too soon because of these terrible illnesses.

Much love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

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