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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2013-06-05 07:44 AM



    

I have witnessed the bronze of those bentley mornings
when dawn was more than saliva on some lipstick smile
and those eyes were arrows that entered my eros shirt

when the exiting was less painful and not noticeable
until it rained after in afterthought and I noticed the stains
of wanting more than just a passing coffee house glance

when there were not so many danceable songs remaining
but time was not an issue one could put consideration on
kind of like how leather smells when worn for the first time

with just that imagined fitting and not the punishing payments

______________


daark



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jwesley
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1 posted 2013-06-05 11:17 AM


One of your best, my friend.

j.

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2013-06-06 07:28 AM


J....thank you sir


Margherita
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3 posted 2013-06-06 09:41 AM


quote:
when the exiting was less painful and not noticeable


Oh my! Words and picture exude emotions that only you can stir.

This is a sensuous car with its perfect lines of roundness ... awakening dreams.

Luxury and beauty combined.

Margherita

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2013-06-06 10:05 AM


Ms Mar...thank you special lady
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5 posted 2013-06-06 11:04 AM


I know I often miss the point in poetry ... and I don't think I am a covetous person ... but that car is more than sublime.   And so is your poem, Daark.

Ali-san

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2013-06-06 11:15 AM


Ms Ali-san..thank you little one..Bentley tin is seductive as most any woman would imagine herself to be and visa versa.
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