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The Kiss
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The Kiss |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Warm lips searching seeking mine Tentatively touch my eager anticipation Tongues meet tip to tip He bites gently on my lower lip Knees go weak Strong arms pulling closer reveal reactions Hard realities LGR©5/23/13 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, indeed, Lori. The person you wrote this poem for is one very lucky guy, and I imagine he is aware of that. Hot poetry, done with taste. ~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Takes one to know one Jerry. Your poem I read earlier inspired this one. It is funny how I don't feel nearly as old on paper as I really am. Know what I mean? Lori  |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, Lori, I absolutely do know what you mean. I'm happy my poem brought this one out for you. That's a nice thing to know. ~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Nice kiss and, um, between you and Jerry, I mean, um, between both of your poems shared here, lately... I'm, ah, getting a bit tongue tied. Anyways, yeah, again, Nice Kiss! |
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Daddy Goose38 Member
since 2010-09-04
Posts 430obama's a rice paper tiger |
MmmmmmmmHmmmmmmmmmmh Lori????? :----------) Jaime |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine romantic writing...James |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
sweet poem with a happy ending |
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