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Open Poetry #48

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-05-22 05:42 AM

her eyes were green
her lips were sexy red
her skin was ever soft
she took my breath
…
I still can't breathe

©May 16, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

1 posted 2013-05-22 07:56 AM

So much in so few, some times too many
words would truly be wasted
simple bliss, enjoy her

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-05-22 08:07 AM

Yes, absolutely EmmaRose, I shall . . . Thank you . . .

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

chourouk
Member

since 2012-05-29

Posts 52

3 posted 2013-05-22 12:29 PM

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2013-05-22 12:38 PM

My goodness, thank you very much, chourouk.

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2013-05-22 08:25 PM

This one literally made me say, Yes! (two thumbs up) I'm so happy for you! That last line was / is Fantastic! Enjoyed!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

6 posted 2013-05-22 08:54 PM

Ahh, thank you so much for that exclamation of happiness for me, Bob. Heh.Heh You made my day.

~*~ PMS jokes aren't funny, period. ~*~

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