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Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

0 posted 2013-05-17 07:56 AM



I love a gentle breeze
that playfully skips around,
shuffling ths leaves
and ringing the wind chimes.
It dances around my head
and whispers in my ear,
secrets of exciting adventures
and faraway places.
After all, the wind has been...
everywhere.

                Ida Werrett

© Copyright 2013 Ida Werrett - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-05-17 09:05 AM


Crisp, informative writing Ida, which gives you a feeling of wind lightly caressing your body. Naturalistic write.

~*~ I'm reading a book about anti-gravity.  I can't put it down. ~*~

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2013-05-17 05:58 PM


So beautiful, dear Ida. I just felt the caress of the breeze too through your words. You listen so well.

Margherita

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2013-05-20 08:54 PM


Along with "seasoned" what a carefree and happy little traveler your poem portrays. Enjoyed!  
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
4 posted 2013-05-21 10:39 AM


simply excellent !!


"Men claim they 'know' many things
   But lo, they have taken wings
   All the 'arts' and the 'sciences'
     and myriad 'appliances' ...
   The Wind that blows
   is far, far more
   Than any man truly 'knows!..."

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2013-05-21 01:16 PM


"The wind has been everywhere."  So perfect and right on !!!

much enjoyed...

j.

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
6 posted 2013-05-21 03:49 PM


I enjoyed this, makes me smile. The wind going places we can merely dream of

Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
7 posted 2013-05-22 01:53 PM


Oh, this was lovely Ida! Beautifully descriptive and I love your closing line. Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2013-05-23 02:29 AM


delicious...I consider the wind a kiss from God...James
Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
9 posted 2013-05-23 03:33 AM


Thank you all for stopping by. Lovely thought, James.
                      Ida

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