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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-05-01 07:21 PM



the blinds on the window
slices the sun upon my lover's
sweaty after-lovin' legs
into kaleidoscope patterns
drifting onto my stomach and chest
as if spotlighting us
for a job well done
she giggles
perhaps she was thinking the same as I
dust motes lazily
drift in and out of the sun's rays
I've often wondered
if inhaled dust motes hurt our lungs
it's a thought
after-lovin' thoughts
wonder what she's thinking
a-choo!
she sneezed
dust motes probably caused that
I like to watch her
out of the corner of my eye
after-lovin'
I like to observe how her body
returns to normal
the air-conditioning cools her skin
drying the after-lovin' sweat
she goes from breathing abnormally heavily
stomach quivering
mouth open
to slowly becoming calm
mouth closed
eyes open staring at the ceiling
as I watch her return to normal
I would love
just once
to get inside her head
what would I see

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2013-05-01 09:53 PM


Enjoyed reading this...James
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-05-01 10:15 PM


Thanks, James, appreciate it.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

Lighthousebob
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3 posted 2013-05-03 12:02 PM


OK, Jerry, you set us up for that one and, no, I'm not gonna go there...  (dust motes).  
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-05-03 12:33 PM


Hah! Just random, after lust thoughts, Bob, just musing . . . Thank you for stopping by.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

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