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Morning |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Early... Quiet. Morning is a bird perched on a branch growing out of the dawn, getting ready to take flight with a flutter of wings and a burst of song. To abandon the soft serenity of night and soar into the light with fearless anticipation. Ida Werrett |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
How sweet the song of the morning bird at my window, making the transition from my deep sleep easier to break the spell of. Sweet reminders through your pretty poem |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice and earthy is this view of nature and one of its inhabitants. I enjoyed the moment, Ida. ~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Awww free as a bird....such a sweet poem, Ida. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Whisper-exquisite, Ida! Of all your beautiful poetry, this, in my humble opinion, is the most beautiful, the most touching and the most heart-quivering. "Morning is a bird" - what a perfect metaphor - I will remember and be inspired by that forever, and its source. Thank you for the wonderful experience - and I am so happy for the experience you must have had, when you were inspired to write this sparkling, dew-drop gem! Owl |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Ida, this is lovely. I love this time of year and love watching the birds dance through spring. Much enjoyed this.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Pure delight, dear Ida! Brava! Margherita |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
So peaceful, so beautiful, Ida. I love those mornings. E |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
"Morning is a bird..." What a lovely meditation and poem. Enjoyed! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Thank you, fellow poets for reading and commenting. This is a new one. I haven't been writing much lately. Trying to get back into the habit. Ida |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love morning and now see it with a new light. Morning is peaceful ... until it is filled with bird song and then it is a concert I love to hear. So wonderful, Ida. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
such a serene metaphor, ida, enjoyed a lot the sensation of serenity, yann |
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Freely_expressing Member
since 2008-10-16
Posts 69NSW, Australia |
That was an enjoyable read! Such a fitting and enjoyable metaphor Ben |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
Reading such a wonderful poem is quite refreshing. I enjoyed this beautiful morning you described in such detail. |
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