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Open Poetry #48

First Moment You Meet

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2013-05-01 12:07 PM

First Moment You Meet

What was it that
was attracting me to her,
I mean besides the obvious,
the gorgeous smile
the kiss me lips
her sexy walk
her swinging hips;
perhaps it was
that she had
recently arrived
from Hong Kong
and she was
eager to please
perhaps it was
her proficiency
in knowing
the proper way
to flirt and tease.
Anyway either you like
someone or you don't
and its twice as neat
when you like someone
from the first moment
that you meet.

JamesLee
30April
2013

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

1 posted 2013-05-02 05:23 PM

I really like the variation of the word 'like' you use here and um, yeah, it seems that the gal in your poem certainly had a lot going on for her that was likable.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2013-05-08 10:17 PM

Thank you Lighthousebob for the nice response...James

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