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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana

0 posted 2013-04-30 09:44 PM


I am not preoccupied with death, although I write often about it. That is because I am nearer to it than ever before. But contrary to what some might think, I do not obsess on death. It's just that it creeps into my poetical voice from time to time. I am heathery than many my age, and look to many more years of standing tall.

I've been in some scrapes,
street battles, marital unrest.
Oh my, I've lost and found
more than most can imagine.
These days I sip a cuppa joe,
staring at dawn breaking
take the leash from its hook
call Zoe for our morning walk
routine, my days are all about
routine – fix breakfast, wash
what I need to wash and to
the computer I go, hoping
to hear from two special
people I know only through
the Internet – they make my
day. Outside the many hued
birds are chirping and hopping
around looking for edibles
the sun highlights their colors
I post a poem wondering why
I have lost the desire for novel
writing. Seems I am just sitting
here each day waiting for death
to put its icy cold fingers upon
my still beating heart – sure
we all wait on death, some don't
understand that part of life, the
time of age when throughout
the day dying crosses your mind
more so than not. Morbid, but it's
coming, can't hold it back. Ah . . .
I raise my second cup,and sip the
bitterness of strong dark coffee,
helping chase away impure and
depressing thoughts as I watch the
suns rays chase my morning blues away.
Sigh. Guess I'll try to write a poem.

©April 22, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton


~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-02-2013 08:39 PM).]

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2013-05-01 09:06 AM


You don't have to own a dog or be old to relate to this one Jerry. Heartfelt write.


lori

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2013-05-02 06:23 PM


Well, I'm sure Zoe appreciates the routine of getting her morning walk... I know Harley (my dog) does enjoy his evening's. Oh, and, yeah, if they're routine or not, can't really say, but I think they're probably more spontaneous, but, um, I, for one, appreciate, as well as I'm sure others do, those poems your sharing here at PIP.  Thanks!  


EmmaRose
Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
3 posted 2013-05-02 06:38 PM


Zoe is a blessing in your life, you are lucky to have her.
I am sorry you are this preoccupied with
death.  You seem too vital and vibrant for
this plaque of darkness

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
4 posted 2013-05-02 06:47 PM


You are so right, Lori. Thank you for your presence.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
5 posted 2013-05-02 06:48 PM


Thanks Bob, my thoughts are varied and I relate to many things, my pen transcribes what I can. I appreciate your comments, they make my day.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2013-05-02 06:51 PM


Emma, I am not preoccupied with death, although I write often about it. That is because I am nearer to it than ever before. But contrary to what some might think, I do not obsess on death. It's just that it creeps into my poetical voice from time to time. I am heathery than many my age, and look to many more years of standing tall.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2013-05-03 12:32 PM


I think it is just normal to think of death the closer you get to it. How can you not.
I just try not to dwell on it since there's nothing I can do about it.
                               Ida

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
8 posted 2013-05-03 05:30 AM


That a fact, Ida. I doubt I dwell on it more than many my age. Thanks for stopping by, i appreciate it.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

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