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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2013-04-25 01:34 AM



Having Tail

I liked the way
when the mermaid smiled
her eyes sparkled
and her lips
filled with passion,
her laugh so fine
her giggle divinge
and her tail
never going
out of fashion.

JamesLee
22April
2013


    

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-04-25 08:25 AM


Out of fashion? Never.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

SimplyGold
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2 posted 2013-04-26 11:44 PM


How sweet. I enjoyed this imagery very much.

Thank you.

SG

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3 posted 2013-04-27 02:47 AM


You make me smile, James. Whimsical - and I love whimsical!

A

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2013-04-29 07:53 PM


Um, yeah, I don't know, maybe I need to take a break from reading too much poetry, my mind's kinda goin' places, but, um, yeah, I'm a tail man, too, myself. Enjoyed!
jwesley
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5 posted 2013-04-29 10:00 PM


Loved it ... !

j.

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2013-04-30 10:12 AM


I'm with Alison James, this made me smile too. I loved the delightful twist in this. Good to read you!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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