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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2013-04-24 02:29 PM


   a woman’s heart (#2)

Beneath a whispering moon
and boundless universe
of endless possibilities,
in this star-bright midnight
   calm and solitude,
One poet dreams only of
a magic chance to explore
the infinitely gentle and generous
depths of a lovely woman’s heart,
always unfathomably grand,
precious, and mysterious
as any wide wild sea!

           --- b. e. adams


© Copyright 2013 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-04-24 02:50 PM


Beautiful poetry, my friend, but be wary of those wide wild seas, they have been known to be treacherous.

~*~ How does Moses make his tea? Hebrews it. ~*~

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada
2 posted 2013-04-24 04:54 PM



A sturdy vessel and a firm hand on a steering wheel...
...should get thru any storm...
(well, almost...lol).

Well done, Bruce.

CG

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2013-04-25 01:47 AM


Nice...James
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
4 posted 2013-04-25 04:23 AM


I don't care for some romantic poetry, Bruce
but yours is some of the best I have ever read. It has a classical magic about it.
                            Ida

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
5 posted 2013-04-29 06:49 PM


You explore and illuminate the fringes of intangibles very well here.  Enjoyed!  
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
6 posted 2013-04-29 10:02 PM


Very nicely done, my friend.  Enjoyed the read.

j.

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