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EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest

0 posted 2013-04-10 10:05 AM



Through the branches
your confident song

always familiar
always on cue

never offkey
nor compromising
changing direction
nor faltering

something constant
much needed

in a world
that is drifting

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2013-04-10 10:08 AM


Profound thoughts and written perfectly. Something to hold onto with the knowledge that it will not float away, or disappear, is such a vital comfort when a steadfast rock is needed.

~*~ Jokes about German sausages are the wurst~*~

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376
Midwest
2 posted 2013-04-10 10:13 AM


yep, some days, the steadfast rock is much needed, today being one of them.

thanks for stopping by

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2013-04-10 09:19 PM


So true, my friend, and so well put. And loved the title which says it all.

j.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2013-04-10 10:00 PM


Yes, tranquility itself is a song and you've expressed it so well here. Enjoyed!
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
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Durban, South Africa
5 posted 2013-04-11 02:05 AM


Exquisite, EmmaRose.  What a perfect blend of inspiration and beauty from the brave and glorifying soul of a tiny little bird and the art and heart of EmmaRose!  I am glad the little bird was there for you, especially today.

Owl

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
6 posted 2013-04-11 02:26 AM


Lovely!  That song is such a great wake-up call for those who listen.  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2013-04-25 01:31 AM


Very nice...James
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
8 posted 2013-04-26 02:34 PM


Yes, we need that song now. Beautiful poetry helps yoo.
                          Ida

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