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Daddy Goose38
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0 posted 2013-04-09 06:08 PM



Okay I’m gonna make up this here poem to make Alison laugh.

The Bars on Mars

They don’t have bars on mars
Because they had to close them all down
Because nobody went to them any more
Because they were too crowded
Because there were no places to park
Because there were no markings for you to park inside of
Because there were no cars on Mars
And therefore no gas stations
Because there was no gas on mars.
I am in direct communication with the cats on Mars
Which is how I know all this.


Nurse! … Nurse!
Is it bedtime now???


Jaime (I think).

quiet with Ginny

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1 posted 2013-04-10 12:16 PM


How about a smile, Jamie.  You definitely made me smile.

Thank you.
Ali

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2013-04-10 12:55 PM


Funny...if there are no bars I hope there are places like Starbucks and Jamba Juice...James
jwesley
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3 posted 2013-04-10 09:23 PM


LOL --- very, very cute, my friend!  Especially fitting end!!

(the color of the text was very hard to read on my screen though)

really enjoyed the smiles...

j.

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