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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2013-04-07 08:57 AM




beliefs in darkness

whipped into crystalline lies

dreams melt in daylight


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Michael
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1 posted 2013-04-07 12:53 PM


Wow!   This one is pure poetry, Icebox.  I can feel the violation that daylight has brung with it.  Excellent writing.

Michael  

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2013-04-09 01:23 PM


For me, the word 'melt' or, um, to experience a slow death is what's most alarming.  Enjoyed!    
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2013-04-20 04:28 PM


It just takes a few words, Mr. Ice.
                            Ida

ebonygirl
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4 posted 2013-04-23 12:15 PM


Truth would be revealed
if eyes where opened
to what and who
is the real boogie man.
Cool poem!
E

Krawdad
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5 posted 2013-04-23 12:56 PM


and recrystallize in the night
OwlSA
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6 posted 2013-04-23 03:27 AM


My interpretation of this, is that the dreams were scary and dark, and that daylight brought light and warmth to dispell the horror of the dreams . . .

Beautiful anyway, no matter the interpretation.

Owl

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2013-05-04 08:33 PM


Very fine writing...James
icebox
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in the shadows
8 posted 2013-05-12 10:55 AM


Thank you all.


Margherita
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9 posted 2013-05-12 11:48 AM



Truth blooms in the night

eyes hide from sunlit survey

dreams love perfection



I felt inspired by your mysterious poetic exploit, dear Charly.

Margherita

icebox
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10 posted 2013-05-13 12:29 PM


Margherita, well done!  

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