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Yesterday's Email
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Yesterday's Email |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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YESTERDAY’S EMAIL 13 March 2013 Those words you sent me yesterday awakened flutters in my heart and ever since you’re in my head - you struck with Cupid’s dart. You entice me with that special fruit that Adam received from Eve when all I want to do is hold my head and grieve the us that was annulled with news of truth and lies and I am trying hard to be what’s good and true and wise yet when you look at me that way I can’t think logically and only see bright Heaven’s stars spread wide in a celestial sea. Owl |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Your poem and imagery are lovely ... the anguish, not so much. Enjoyed!  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
it seems very emotionnal, diana, the heart can't avoid kind of anguishes, and this e mail seems to create disorder, try to forget by writing (if i have understood well) have a nice day yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Bob. Thanks for enjoying the poem and the imagery, and not (giggles) the anguish. Your kindness is much appreciated. Thanks, Yann. Yes, you understood it perfectly. Thank you for your kind and compassionate reply. Owl |
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