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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2013-04-02 04:10 PM


Now I know
what I knew
that I would
eventually know
there was always a
win or lose
between me and you

and where did it begin really?
somewhere between realities sake
and the delusions we cant shake?

the fear .. paranoia
between you and I
and I always knew
what you knew
I should know
this CAN be a
win-win situation
between me and you



~~~kingsangel~~~

[This message has been edited by Angel4aKing (04-03-2013 05:59 PM).]

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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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1 posted 2013-04-03 02:33 PM


...so, um, I suppose the 'lose' is still that he doesn't know for himself what he knew you should know and now you know, but he doesn't. Right? ...or am I confused.  Anyways, I enjoyed the word play!  
Sue_s
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since 2013-03-26
Posts 45

2 posted 2013-04-03 03:33 PM


I, too, enjoyed the word play. I have started a few poems myself, in a similar fashion, but, could never pull it off. You did. Nicely done. Hope he figures it out.

(Typo on delusions)

Sue

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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3 posted 2013-04-03 07:54 PM


Thank you both...

wordplay does seem to be my forte' ... however I am trying to find a new muse mine seems to be of a negative undertone which I am trying to get a way from ...

Again thanks for stoppping by to read this glad you enjoyed!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

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