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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Small bridge of Brooklynn, I like the margarine, I like hot dogs, Harlem is going to dance on white powders, 42nd street, delirious, Do you want some ? do you want some ? The yellow taxis Spread the pedestrians, 34th street, what do you say ? What do you say ? The Empire State Building wants to dominate the game, I am going to rest in Central Park, That of soft poisons, We are high buildings, We raise ourselves as a single business, In the bay of apples, The statue of Liberty, welcomes the autumn with its green oxides... |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
yann, I am applauding. Wonderful ~ simply wonderful. I want one of those hotdogs for breakfast! xoxo A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful...James |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Two thumbs up ,,,, it is all that I would imagine  ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wonderfully vivid. Love your little snapshots!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Totally agree with Alison ... loved it my friend. j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks alison for your wonderful comment, applause too for you my friend, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks james, |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
two thumbs up for you too, ange14, yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks blueserenade, loved your comment, |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jwesley, apreciated it yann |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I especially liked the talking buildings and, also, thank you for the small tour with all its tastes, sounds, and visuals. Enjoyed!  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I've never been to New York, yann but now I feel like I have. ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks bob, for the precious end supportive comment yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thanks Ida, america is such a large country, los angeles is so far frim new york , it seems to a french as going to moscow, have a nice day yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I enjoyed your poem, Yann. I am not going to pretend that it is a favourite of mine, though it is so obviously very well written (and I know you won't be offended because there are so many, many of your poems that I have really, really loved - especially your poems about nature) as concrete jungles normally leave me cold, though your poem certainly makes this slice of New York an interesting flash vision for me - like a quick, vibrant scene in a movie. Owl |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
o diana, i love your sincerity and i smiled, when we trust some poet we can't be offended but rather honored by his comment, what a generous comment and appreciation, thanks a lot yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Yann, for understanding so perfectly and for responding with such grace and kindness. Owl |
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