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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2013-03-29 08:13 PM





Not only were you an Angel on Earth
But now you are an Angel by God's side
You were my Shelter when I was afraid
From things I didn't comprehend
You kept me safe
I tasted your love in your cookies
I felt your kisses in your pies
And when you held me
I never wanted to let you go
If girls are made of sugar and spice
And everything nice
Then Grandmas are made of cookies and pies


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-03-29 08:27 PM


A wonderful tribute to your grandmother, Ceinwyn, and if it is possible she is smiling now. To take a young Ceinwyn to her breast and dish her out her pie slices and cookies straight out of the oven was love manifesting itself, and that love is given back in the form of these special poetical words. Very nice writing.

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2 posted 2013-03-29 10:17 PM


A lovely tribute this is.  Reminded me of my grandmother and the cookies she used to make "just for me"     enjoyed.

Michael

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3 posted 2013-03-30 12:52 PM


This is the Grandma that I want to be someday.  What a tribute.  I have missed you.

Alison

Ceinwyn
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4 posted 2013-03-30 04:41 PM


Thank you guys so much.  Funny thing is that when I was writing this I wasn't sure where it was going.  But, the cookies and pies just came to me. After I read it at her funeral people came up to me and said that was so Grandma with her cookies and pies
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2013-04-03 12:30 PM


Nice slice of love and memories for your Grandma...James
Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2013-04-03 09:43 PM


Ahhhh, your poem is so special and that it brought back 'cookies and pies' from your Grandmother for others makes it even that much more special. It brought back memories of my Mother's home made pies for me. Thanks for sharing.  
EmmaRose
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7 posted 2013-04-06 11:06 AM


cookies made by a loved one do fill our senses with great memories. May you embrace these as comfort
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