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Spiros Zafiris
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0 posted 2013-03-28 06:28 PM



this aplomb
of hers enchants each root
each sacrament
echoes in distant clefts
more soberly to inspire her
~~
..circa 2006..(C)2013 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram
~~

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-03-28 06:41 PM


Sorry, I think I took your meaning wrong.

~*~ I changed my iPod name to Titanic. It's syncing now. ~*~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-28-2013 07:14 PM).]

Spiros Zafiris
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2 posted 2013-03-28 06:56 PM


..thanks Jerry..>>i'm pleased you read though
i'll have to give your comment further thought..>>>spiros

OwlSA
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3 posted 2013-03-29 03:19 AM


Very beautiful and sacredly intimate, Spiros.

Owl

Spiros Zafiris
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4 posted 2013-03-29 03:39 AM


..thanks much Diana..'tis one i had never
posted before..then i posted it in a workshop i'm in and it was well received there too..and, now,  i've posted it here
..and in other places, too,soon, i hope..i'm very
pleased you like it..it sort of reminds me of you..best wishes and be strong..>>spiros
~~

OwlSA
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5 posted 2013-03-29 04:03 AM


Thank you, Spiros for your kind words.  I am very honoured that your poem reminds you of me.  You and your words are indeed inspiring.  Smiles.

Owl

Spiros Zafiris
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6 posted 2013-03-29 04:26 AM


..don't mention it, Diana..continue writing
and be strong..i'm sure not only I roots for
you..i've noticed that you have many fans
..now, perhaps i'll write a new poem..>>>spiros
~~
..p.s.: true, though, i read this tanka of mine and said: that's what goes on in Owl's life..though it was written before i knew you..
~~

OwlSA
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7 posted 2013-03-29 05:37 AM


Thank you, Spiros.  Smiles.

Owl

Lighthousebob
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8 posted 2013-03-29 12:09 PM


Yeah, I agree, 'aplomb' makes for a great analogy here and, also, the second phrase does compliment the first very very well. Enjoyed!
Spiros Zafiris
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9 posted 2013-03-29 03:23 PM


...thanks Bob...i much appreciate
your kindness..

..spiros
~~

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