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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2013-03-28 12:40 PM




The sun
He arrives earlier
lingers longer
in robes of
ever changing
radiant hues
Brilliant from
consorting with
maiden Moon
Desires distill in
her waning time
She sheds her
golden gown
of beams
Stripping slivers
as she slowly
pirouettes

LGRĀ©3/28/13  
  

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-03-28 12:44 PM


Aww, Lori, this is just stupendous. You have the enviable knack of knowing just what words belong where in your poetry. This is an excellent example of that. I can see the "consorting" of Mr. Sun and Maiden Moon perfectly . . .

~*~ I changed my iPod name to Titanic. It's syncing now. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2013-03-28 01:00 PM


Jerry, thank you for your unwavering support and unrelenting praise. You keep me posting onward. Bless your heart!


lori

Ceinwyn
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3 posted 2013-03-28 05:53 PM


Just lovely!
Sue_s
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4 posted 2013-03-28 09:21 PM


Very eloquent writing. Much enjoyed
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2013-03-29 09:09 AM


Ceinwyn,
Thank you for stopping to read my work, I'm happy to see you enjoyed this piece. I appreciate you letting me know.


lori

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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6 posted 2013-03-29 09:12 AM


Sue_s,
Welcome to the blue buffet! I'm glad my little piece was to your liking! I think you will enjoy it here!

lori

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