»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #48
»
Held Hostage
| Open Poetry #48 |
|
Held Hostage |
|
|
EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest 
|
Don't let us wait too long Now is the time, the rosewater seeps through the cloud covers, its fragrant elixir courting the green that has yet to attach to the meadow out yonder, there where the fruit begins a saccahrine reverie hangs on the cliff's edge, the waterfall longing to break through the deafness effect just this, for now the writing, abbreviated, while only the piper knows that where the tune plays the heart soon will follow [This message has been edited by EmmaRose (03-25-2013 06:15 PM).] |
||
| © Copyright 2013 EmmaRose - All Rights Reserved | |||
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I really love this...every line drew me in like the tides...and love the ending too. Enjoyed Emma...  ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
||
|
JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Okay . . . Poetry doesn't get better than . . . quote: The quote is the ones I liked best, but the whole poem, line for line, was astounding. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poetry is is like a meadow of wild flowers. Every word is uplifting, like a gentle breeze, its just so refreshing. Lovely work EmmaRose.. |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
