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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2013-03-20 11:13 AM


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Spring
And yet I think we’ll keep
Our coats and jackets on
For a little more time to come

Somewhere now another dog
Is huddled in his makeshift house
By a one car garage  There are no
Robins or cardinals in the morning
Sky the air too cold

I remember flowers yellow
Red and blue water rippling
Over colored pebbles passing
Under a wooden bridge

Waiting for her
To appear the sun rising
In the East to warm the world

At the end of the month
My girl the love of my life
Will be sixty years old


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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
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1 posted 2013-03-20 02:41 PM


especially grand-fine impressionistic imagery!:

"I remember flowers yellow
Red and blue water rippling
Over colored pebbles passing
Under a wooden bridge

Waiting for her
To appear the sun rising
In the East to warm the world..."

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2013-03-20 07:45 PM


  In the middle of the month my girl was almost there... but not quite. Enjoyed.
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2013-03-21 06:42 AM


I saw signs of Spring trying to rise this week...

a happy 60 to the love of your life

M

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