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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2013-03-16 09:53 AM

Each promise was a seed to reap;
roots furrowed deeply in the soul,
flourishing abundantly in the heart,
with each rosette of love we stole.

The vibrant palette of our hearts doth stir,
A paradisiacal bouquet;
lightly brushstroking a quiet demur,
with radiant colors of cabernet.

Whilst love lit the candle of our embrace,
and vanishing into a memory,
drifting like water lilies with no trace;
ripples of love became a reverie.

Whilst love lit the candle of our embrace,
Still, I see the silhouette of your face.

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by Victoria (03-17-2013 06:52 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2013-03-16 09:59 AM

Whence love lit the candle of our embrace,
and time became a memory,
flowing into a river with no trace;
ripples became a reverie.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I felt the bittersweet longing of what once was.

Beautiful writing!!!

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2013-03-16 10:00 AM

Difficult to shake off those silhouettes, Victoria, and sometimes we never do. I have my own, Nanette, of course.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2013-03-16 10:06 AM

Thank you Lori, I see you are awake early out there in California. Nice to hear from you this morning...hugss

Jerry...yes and what a pretty name that is...Thank you for peeking in as always.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2013-03-22 12:42 PM

quote:
Whilst love lit the candle of our embrace,
Still, I see the silhouette of your face.

Though time passes, glimmers do seem to always remain (Sentimental sigh). Enjoyed.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2013-03-22 01:36 PM

Yes those tortuous memories always linger.
Thank you for peeking in...it was so nice to hear your comments again today Bob.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

6 posted 2013-03-25 03:49 PM

Makes me long for a glass of merlot beside
a fireplace
Real nice romance with an edge
thanks for sharing

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2013-03-25 04:11 PM

Thank so much you Emma...nice to hear from you today as always...

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

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