the inside of jane's pockets

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Open Poetry #48

the inside of jane's pockets

Tomer
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since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2013-03-15 08:12 PM

Jane felt her hair undo a slight tear
against his skinny jeans
that resembled the cobbled streets
with their narrow edges and open potholes
crevasses,
leading to his jean pockets

Her bra sided with the north wind
pink, nylon
pressed against skins void

with a small rainfall
a tactful boy
with his wry smile
like a peaches bend
as it slowly opened

Jane against a tears midnight eve
under the flaccid night
with a hand next to hers
against the tepid sound of the sun
as she lent her small nose
a small sneeze
before she left for another narrow roads ease.

[This message has been edited by Tomer (03-15-2013 09:16 PM).]

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2013-03-26 12:29 PM

Really enjoyed this...James

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

2 posted 2013-03-26 10:12 PM

Creative use of words that kept me intrigued to read over and over. Enjoyed.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2013-04-08 01:05 AM

Thanks, James. Happy you enjoyed.

Cheers

Tomer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

4 posted 2013-04-08 01:05 AM

Lighthouse-

Happy it struck a chord with you - take care.

Cheers,

Tomer

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