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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-03-14 06:44 AM


my lips softly touch your cheek
a blush from you
your hands go to your breasts
I bow; kiss your throat
from you a sultry moan
eyes; misty now
await my next amorous move
I lift your hands to my lips
tenderly we hold each other close
a soft whisper of lace
a sigh from your throat so pure
eyes closed, lips tremulous
your response no longer passive
deftly brush your hand
across my swell
a croak from me will do for a sigh
as if on cue we merge as one
with guttural cries of anticipation
we begin to disrobe
I reach back with my foot
kick the door closed
what we are about not for public view
our passion is raw
our love eternal

©March 13, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton



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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-03-14 08:22 AM


I like the kicking the door closed part...nicely done Jerry...full of passion and desire.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-03-14 08:30 AM


Many thanks, Victoria, for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.

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