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ponderthepoetorrsx
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since 2011-06-25
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0 posted 2013-03-13 12:26 PM




You and I
We could have been a poem
Perhaps a sonnet or a song.
But why would it matter?
If you don't care at all,
I can see you now in the future
And it hurts my eyes too see,
So dumfounded I can not speak.
You in pleasure,
Me in agony,
Perhaps its envy, lust, or pride,

But it hurts,
It hurts,
To bleed to cry
Deep into the hours of darkness,
Into this miserable imperishable night.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2013-03-14 12:22 PM


Fine writing...James
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