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Star shower deviation |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 *** Her steps resounded with indifference. A grey bench yawned into her face she yawned back and sat down with a sigh. A giant black hole lured her mind. She closed her eyes to drift into oblivion. Yet the trees hovered kindly above her like sentinels in their emergency attire. In the stillness she perceived peace she surrendered to this serene hush wrapping herself into it, feeling safe. Raindrops poured down her face, heaven sent Angel tears mingling with hers. The voices of Nature entered her ears, a bird’s song caressed her soul. Open to love she received the healing touch. Her eyes distinguished the colors again. As if renewed by a shower of light she stretched and fetched the sunrays. Drops of rain radiated diamond sparks. Her legs moved with the lightness of Spring. Universe cares and sends strings of light to brighten our skies when they hide the sun. There are Angels ready to intervene by arranging a star shower deviation with our heart center as the destination. *** |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You my dear are a fine writer...James |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
What a magnificent piece of poetry, Margherita. You touched every emotion there was to touch within the lines of this well-crafted poem. Yes. I was there. Felt the rain. Saw the tears, and observed as the angels gave her lightness of heart and brilliance of color and a spring in her step. Just damn good writing. ~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Eloquently penned as always dear Margherita.  ~Victoria I was adored once too. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear James, for your loving compliment! Dear Jerry, your generous comment makes me blush, thank you so much. I am happy that you enjoyed this piece. Thank you, dear Victoria, for your kind appreciation. Love and enjoy your Sunday evening! Margherita  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello, margherita, i specially loved the image of the star deviation , which have a great impact in hearts, this is delightful to think things like that and specially when stars bring light , thanks for the eloquent and graceful poem, yann |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You always bring a special kind of love and joy with your unique view of life, Margherita. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much for your loving and heartwarming comments, dear Yann and dear Ida! Love, Margherita |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
There are Angels ready to intervene by arranging a star shower deviation with our heart center as the destination. I have missed many poetic treasures - I'm so glad I did not miss this one. Beautiful and inspiring! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"The voices of Nature entered her ears, a bird’s song caressed her soul. Open to love she received the healing touch." Absolutely wonderful Margherita! I love how you captured the healing powers of nature and the way in which she works her magic. Just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
Thank you for bringing our Angels of reminder when we desperately need them |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
let's the angels intervene, margherita, this I quite a good inspiration, and a very sensitive sharing, have a nice day yann |
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ebonygirl Member Elite
since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000California U.S.A |
There must have been Angels around you as you penned this beautiful poem, Margherita. Ms. E. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am so surprised this morning to see this poem of mine on top I am smiling, as I came in also with the idea to post something new ...Thank you, dear Ruth, for unearthing this one and for your most loving comment. It's so nice to find you back in here, you were sorely missed. May this day bring you sparkling inspiration! Dear Kit, thank you so much for commenting so generously on my offering. I am grateful for your presence on Pip, you too were so much missed for a long time. Dear EmmaRose, thank you dear. Yes the Angels are always with us, but sometimes we are not enough aware of this most precious gift. Dear Yann, thank you so much for your kind reply. Have a nice day you too! Dear Ebonygirl, that's a very nice thing to say, thank you! Yes, they are with us always and if we let them, they no doubt manifest also in what we do and think. Love and joy to all. Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
It's always a pleasure to read your sweet wonderful poetic words. I enjoyed each and every line. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear ken, for your very kind words. Margherita |
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