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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2013-03-10 07:11 PM



Activating Receptors


When she touched me
and gave me that look
and followed with a smile
I felt like it was
the blessings from an angel,
for when love and acceptance
visit you close up
there is nothing left to do
but to receive it.

JamesLee
07March
2013

  

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2013-03-10 07:15 PM


I love the title and how you develop the theme, dear James.

So true!

Beautiful.

Margherita

Victoria
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2 posted 2013-03-10 07:17 PM


Yes how can you say no? Sweet James.
~Victoria

JerryPat2
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3 posted 2013-03-10 07:25 PM


The intimacy of this poem is fascinating and written superbly . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

2islander2
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4 posted 2013-03-11 02:00 AM


women can be angels, nice, james,


have a nice day


yann


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