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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-03-05 07:18 PM


                    

America! Goodbye! Goodbye!
Statue of Liberty farewell.
I'm so watching as you die,
Your corpse already has the smell.

Your breath grows weak each passing day,
And all we do is sit and watch.
As from within you do decay,
It's like you've been kicked in the crotch.

How can we stop this tidal wave,
Which is taking freedom from us?
Some tried to stop it, they were brave,
The rest, like me, wrote poems and cussed.

The evil has been too entrenched,
We've watched it for years, we're to blame.
While sitting here upon our bench,
A nation of cowards; for shame!

This is not my father's good earth,
Every day some new kind of fright.
Poisonous weeds is our re-birth,
This once proud land, Goodnight, Goodnight!

©February 16, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

Work-in-Progress . . . Raconteur

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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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1 posted 2013-03-06 05:34 AM


So sad but true!  Those who do not know will always outnumber those who do know and so procreate disaster.  I lived through Zimbabwe's slide into that pit and now the country of my birth is following suit.  No country is exempt.  The New World Order will eventually come about.
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-03-06 07:11 AM


Sadly, sadly, you are so sight, Helen, thank you for stopping by.

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Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
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3 posted 2013-03-06 01:44 PM


Couldn't agree more.
             Ida

JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-03-06 01:54 PM


Thank you, Ida. There are a few of us out here.

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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2013-03-06 11:10 PM


Fine writing...James
JerryPat2
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6 posted 2013-03-07 06:37 AM


Thanks...Jmes.

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