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VAS
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0 posted 2013-03-02 10:46 AM


http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap100302.html


in blue rain
a sweet refrain
calls me, "See!"


Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-03-02 11:53 AM


Lovely Virginia...looks like a blue eye with some long black eyelashes or a spider in a web of stars. Enjoyed.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

david3
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2 posted 2013-03-02 02:57 PM


amazing how much can be conveyed with so little.
jwesley
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3 posted 2013-03-03 11:35 AM


Very nice ... appropriately so ... my friend!

j.

VAS
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4 posted 2013-03-03 04:15 PM


Thanks, all!  Yes, Victoria, it could be a pair of mirrored sunglasses, too, looking back at you. ;o}

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Victoria
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5 posted 2013-03-06 07:12 PM


Now you mention it yes it could be ha...
I never thought of that Virginia. You made me laugh with that one.

~Victoria

Margherita
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6 posted 2013-03-08 12:17 PM


I am spellbound and "see"!

Wondrous and glorious!

Margherita

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