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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2013-02-28 05:41 AM



there was an abundance of possibilities
a caricature with overdone brushstrokes
you were fashioned by master of his art
your gold-tinted hazel eyes stared at me

your voice, seethed with lust, spoke to me
the voice soothing as hummingbird wings
you arrested me in that moment of desire
I was stripped bare of whatever soul I had

you greedily took me and enjoyed my flesh
your fingers drew blood circles on my back
I was helpless to resist; your craving was mine
you stopped your manipulations and said to me

Honey, would you bite this apple just for me?

©February 9, 2013 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-02-28 10:17 AM


One delicious apple...delicious to the core,
Enjoyed Jerry, very creative as always.

~Victoria

I was adored once too.
William Shakespeare

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-02-28 11:29 AM


Thank yew, Victoria, you always know the right thing to say . . .

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-03-02 05:35 PM


nice writing...one of those hard too resist situations...James
JerryPat2
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4 posted 2013-03-02 05:36 PM


Thanks, James. Yeah you're right about the temptation.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

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