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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2013-02-15 11:29 PM



Experience


I text her that I'm thinking about her
She text me that she was missing me
I text her I'm missing her too
She text me "I'm there soon."
I text her..."You're the only
woman I ever loved."
And in my heart
I laugh and smile
I yearn and I cry
for I know from experience
that soon means different
things to different people.


JamesLee
14February
2013

    
  

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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-02-16 07:54 AM


As long as you tell her in person James.

~Victoria

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2013-02-16 08:21 AM


I hear what you're saying, James.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

jwesley
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3 posted 2013-02-16 10:12 AM


Hear, Hear, my friend . . . soon often mean "life-after'death" .... Ha!!! As longer as you understand the 'other's' lingo, you can move on...peacefully.

j.

2islander2
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4 posted 2013-02-18 12:47 PM


very fine, evryone is different and thoughts are personnal, this poem means a lot with grace and talent, thanks a lot,


yann



JamesMichael
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5 posted 2013-02-20 11:44 PM


Thank you Victoria, Jerry, jwesley and 2islander2 for the nice response...James
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