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Victoria
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0 posted 2013-02-15 12:44 PM



It is true what lies beneath the surface,
but the surface is not transparent;
and the wish of the unattainable
is invisible to the one who cares.

Beneath the mask of perfection
is the demureness of a smile;
behind intuitive eyes of a woman
is a natural sixth sense to the blind.

When one is walking in shadows
it is easier to fulfill their needs;
walking quietly unnoticed
in the privacy of their heart.
Being on the outside looking in
into neglectfulness of love.

~Victoria



Be not ashamed of mistakes and thus make them crimes.
Confucius

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-02-15 01:08 PM


Very well thought out and stated, Victoria. This is one hell of a verse, magnificent!

"It is when one walks in the shadows
it is easier to fulfill needs;
as they walk quietly unnoticed
in the privacy of their heart.
Being on the outside looking in
into neglectfulness of love."


~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria
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2 posted 2013-02-15 02:28 PM


Thank you Jerry,I appreciate your supportive comments as always.

~Victoria

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