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Victoria
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0 posted 2013-02-14 12:32 PM



Why does the wind whisper your name?
in the shadows of yesterday;
ever so softly whispering,
reminding of a lost love.
When was it over?
Where did it go?
How did it get started?
I don't know;
Still, I carry your memory
like extra baggage;
lugging you from place to place.
as it lingers
upon a miscellaneous shelf
of lost but not found;
next to the Twinkies and other
memorabilia.

~Victoria


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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2013-02-14 12:59 PM


I have that whispering of lost love, Victoria, and in my case her name was (she has passed on now) Nanette. She was the best thing I had ever had and the best thing I would ever have. I was much too stupid to understand it.

~*~ If they give you ruled paper write sideways . . . ~*~

Victoria
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2 posted 2013-02-14 01:08 PM


Too young to know better...and than its too late...well at least you have nice memories of her. Everyone can relate I'm sure.

~Victoria

2islander2
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3 posted 2013-02-14 01:59 PM


thanks victoria for the loving and precious words about love, life and memories teach us so many thing, thanks for the beautiful and sensitive penning,


yann

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4 posted 2013-02-14 05:49 PM


Thank you yann. Im glad you enjoyed and thank you for reading

~Victoria

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