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LorienLord
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since 2013-02-03
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0 posted 2013-02-14 07:23 AM



I could say
I love your eyes so deep
Pools of quicksand
From which I cannot escape
And slowly as I sink
I realize I'm not afraid
To drown in you.

Or I could say
I love your hair so soft
A river of dark satin
That flows like a torrent
Down your pillow
And across my chest
Flooding the desert of my soul.

Or I could say
I love your lips so warm
That speak the words I long to hear
Falling on me like evening rain
Washing away all my fears
As every night you call me to your side
Whispering promises of eternal love.

Or I could say
I love all the exquisiteness that is you
As your soft and gentle curves
Beckon my fingers to travel the paths
Leading to the crossroads
Of your heart.

Or I could say
I love you.


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Victoria
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1 posted 2013-02-14 08:02 AM


I love those first two verses and the whole poem. Welcome to the blue pages

~Victoria

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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2 posted 2013-02-14 08:41 AM


Ah . . . you could say all that . . . And you just did say it. ice writing.

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JamesMichael
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3 posted 2013-02-14 08:50 PM


And you have said it well...James
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