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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. I watch you Beautiful deer In a forest All your own It is in that silence That you move best Your slender figure Among the shadows What light there is Shining on From a source No one then ever Looks up to see The way you flow Turn your head Your clear eyes calm And still in attitudes As a cloudless Summer sky No words to say Since words would fail To veil the nothings In your brain That self determined Vacuous solitude Where no bird sings . |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
John, I think this is the most beautiful poem of yours that I have ever read. Perfectly titled too, of course. Owl |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Love those last three lines, well done |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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